Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Mermaid Comments

Rating: 5.0

Long arms of moonlight are stretching out
To the gigantic ocean,
For touching those soft curls
Of her mahogany coloured hair.
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Sanjukta Nag
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Valsa George 27 October 2015

Beautiful poem on a mermaid! You have painted the luscious beauty of a mermaid 'floating on her back, gazing at the purple sky'! Though you say humans cannot see her, I can see her before my eyes!

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M Asim Nehal 06 October 2015

Mesmerised with this piece of writing. All adjectives are exhausted to write about this Masterpiece....... Lost in imagery, words and mystery..............AWESOME and FAB....Loved it, loved it and loved it.....100+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2015

Moonlight is stretching out to gigantic ocean to giggle in happiness and to spark the beauty of reflected sky. Really very interesting and wise imagery of nature is drawn in this poem shared. Secret chest of Mariana Trench carefully saves memories. Nice sharing....10

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