Friday, January 3, 2014

Mermaid Comments

Rating: 4.1

You came like the gushy wind
Blowing me away with your might,
You came with your dreams unlimited
Embracing me with your warmth.
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Indranil Bhaduri
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Edward Kofi Louis 19 March 2014

A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this Poem with us. E.K.L.

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Moutusi Sen 03 February 2014

Romance, passion, love. Impressed.

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Crystal Conrick-knight 22 January 2014

Beautifully written with such feeling and insight.interesting use of symbolism and motif.

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Hazel Durham 21 January 2014

With great passion and desire for your mermaid blue of the vast ocean your dream comes true! Superb write!

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Patricia Grantham 07 January 2014

A beautifully touching write. Your words are so passionately written it makes the reader feel the emotions. Good write.

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Tadasha Tripathy 06 January 2014

A beautiful poem with overflowing dreams.I liked it.Happy new year sir.

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Indranil Bhaduri

Indranil Bhaduri

Kolkata, India
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