Mermaid Comments

She had found in him, her father's steely, foreboding charm, That chased her insecurities back to their darkened farm. It's amazing..............10

A smooth flow of words & pleasing to read. A nice composition.

This is like, my new favorite poem ever! ! ! ! Mermaids are my favorite mythical creatures :) I see your from Ireland, I wan to live there reeeaaally badly! GREAT POEM! ~Cece P.S. Feel free to check out mine

Wow..Wonderful poem..With great imagery..Loved it Hazel. Beautiful pictures...

beautifully written, great imagery

Your imagery in this nicely composed poem is great...

Aaah! How did I miss this one? A fantastic write ma'am! And wonderful imagery and very good concept!

As usual this Hazel poem has created a spell of its own with richness of expression and profundity of thoughts well communicated. The ripples of this poetic splendour can be seen from within the depths of the sea where your darling mermaid lives! She will be one day Her Majesty sitting on the amber throne, one hopes. I give you a clean 10 out of 10 for this write and say sorry that I could not read for almost a week Hazel.

amazing story, especially the imagery extraordinary work for awesome poem

Fascinating story Hazel, mermaids always capture ones imagination, and you have done so in this.

A very classic and a marvelous poem.

What a composition! Dream poem is all I can say. Thank you so much for gifting this to us.

How can mermaid complete without a merman! Looking for a lover to lead her back to the beginning. Mermaid is a symbol of unsatisfied love- good presentation- I like it and rate 10

beautiful, it was lovely. i have uploaded a new one naked love. could you please read and comment on it. and yes a 10 for this lovely creation. :)

This is a great write Hazel! Unable to find someone similar to the father figure etched in her mind, like a mermaid, soothing her impulsive soul in the vastness of freedom, she seeks the sanctuary of the sea's mighty fold! !

A real beautiful poem as usual from your pen.

What words you have created. Had to laugh with the ex, but the pure beauty in the write is very clever, thank you