Mermaid Comments

I love thie so much. Anything with the word 'mermaid' automatically will get me interested, but this was so beautifully written.

wonderful imagery fused with amazing imagination very good poem awesome..! ! ! |

beautiful and pure poem great reading

Stunning write with such beautiful imagery!

And far from shadows, He watches his mermaid……. Simply wonderful! 10/10

A lovely picture.

A thought provoking and well crafted metaphoric write that clearly shows your writing abilities and talent! 10+++ Thanks for sharing and keep it up! Romeo, New York City

You paint a lovely mermaid scene - very good.

i love the thought of mermaids nicely written

evocative imagery - sensuous in effect - I liked this

She watches them from shining pond, Her hair trailing her beside in cold beautiful!

A great poem, like it.