Thursday, May 11, 2006

Merlin Comments

Rating: 1.5

Do you think I could give my prayers a little extra boost
by donning a wizard’s robe and waving a magic wand
around while I’m praying? I figure it can’t hurt. Maybe
there’ll be a puff of smoke and my prayers will be
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Nice 'prose', PoHo. I enjoyed this one. What about the clown the other day who tried to break the world record for holding his breath under water (9 minutes): he made it to seven and had to be rescued and now has liver damage. Yeah, real smart.

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Danny Reynolds 11 May 2006

Sorry but I think CGI's knackered any chance he had of a comeback! They can make Tom Cruise look convincing in War of the worlds but..... Hahahahahaa. Danny

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***** ********* 11 May 2006

Nice work PH, In my gospel according to Saint Bob...The impossible is hard, miracles just take a little more effort and razzle dazzle of course! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Grinning, Enjoying her favourite Pie in Poetic Sky,10 helpings from Tai

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