Monday, February 13, 2023

Mergansers And Photographer Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is a story of some Merganser ducks and a photographer. There are thousands of pictures posted on line about ducks in their natural pristine environment. But, there is nothing about how the ducks feel about this. Therefore, I have decided to write this poem from the ducks point of view.


Mergansers and Photographer
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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

CLINCH: 'to make final, definite, or beyond dispute'; synonyms: decide, determine, settle

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

last stanza: If Jim could spul better, maybe he'd have used 'swoop' and 'peer'? ? ? ? 5 stars. The duck-vulgarity clinched my vote. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

'malodorous măl-ō′dər-əs adjective Having a bad odor; foul. Offensive to the sense of smell; ill-smelling. Having a bad odor' A 'fowl-smelling song'? ?

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Jim McGill 10 June 2023

Wrong word. It is only ‘malodorous' if I am singing. The ducks are in much better tune than I will ever be. The word should be: ‘Melodiously'. I have made the changes to the poem. Thank you.

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

3rd stanza I 'love'. ;)

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Jim McGill 10 June 2023

Thank you for your input. I appreciate it very much.

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

'The idiom wrap one's head around something means to understand something, especially something strange or out of the ordinary; to accept something that one does not particularly want to accept.' STRANGE, isn't it?

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

'camera on a '? ? I'm STILL trying to 'wrap my head around' that one (phrase) . 'Mergus is the genus of the typical mergansers / m ɜːr ˈ ɡ æ n s ər z / mur-GAN-sərz, fish-eating ducks in the subfamily Anatinae.'

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Jim McGill 10 June 2023

‘That camera on a '…ducks see things in very simple terms. I don't think they knew her by name. They jus sort of quacked about her and then ate fish. Simple…like me, but I don't eat raw fish.

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Rob Lamberton 14 February 2023

It's not a love story! !

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Rob Lamberton 14 February 2023

McGill speaks straight from the duck bill…quite the picture! 5*****

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Jim McGill 14 February 2023

"Straight from the duck bill." I never thought of it that way. Thank you.

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D.N. Rebb 14 February 2023

You taught me how to finally spell a certain word to keep it active on PH. Just pretend to be a duck. Brilliant

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Jim McGill 14 February 2023

Frankly I thought that my three latest poems would be deactivated by PH. (My Flamin' Freeda Flout, Keep Eyes At Rest, Mouth Shut and Pants On and this one.) I am surprised they weren't.

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