Sunday, August 2, 2015

Merely A Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

So close is the time of a peaceful sleep,
A new white dress,
The smell of camphor,
A dark corner,
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 03 August 2015

This is a multi dimension poem conveying messages. Added to my poem list.

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Valsa George 02 August 2015

This is an excellent write, Akhtar ji! If there is company, even the most abominable prison cells will be brighter! Loneliness is man's most detested enemy! Enjoyed reading this highly fanciful write! A 10

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Khalida Bano Ali 02 August 2015

What an amazing write................................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2015

Excellent one. Groovy collocation. An stunning poem I like most. Thanks for sharing......10

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