Wednesday, March 28, 2007

Mere Words Comments

Rating: 4.4

Today you called to say hello,
To say you love me - now I know
Just why your words enthrall me so..........
I love you.
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Linda Ori
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Scarlett Treat 04 April 2007

You and I seem to be on the same page about love, you with this poem about the possibilities of love and me with my newest poem, about the CONFUSION of a new love....great minds think alike? Anyhow, I loved this one!

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Ted Sheridan 03 April 2007

You are a hopless romantic I see...... good for you.

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Not a member No 4 01 April 2007

Fluid language abounds in this, from the off to the finishing line - effortlessly flowing at that. It has to be the most distinctive characteristic of your writing Linda. Yet another very fine poem from your romantic but realistic soul! jim xx

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David Harris 28 March 2007

Linda, Another GEORGOUS poem. The Rhythm and the Rhyme made this such an easy read. The content was such a comforting reminder of love. Ooooh I just love this poem. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Danny Reynolds 28 March 2007

You may have heard of Windermere, Buttermere and Grassmere? A Mere is a rather enchanting and beautiful phenomenon in the Lake District, and so your mere words are aptly described…. Danny

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''Mere Words'' from you, Midnight? Thats like saying ''mere gems'' in the Hope Diamond! I like this a lot Linda....Smooth as silk....Nice tight versing.... A pleasureable & splendid Read ! ~ FjcR/jr. ~

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