Saturday, November 28, 2009

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To meet my mate since he's away
A wish in me grew green.
Mile by mile i crossed the road
That never in real had been.
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syma tasaduq
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C. P. Sharma 29 November 2009

The inner voyage is blissful and infinite than the worldly voyage. The words, the rhythm and the imagery flow naturally to carry the reader with it. Wonderful poem.10++++++++++++ CP

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Ershad Mazumder 28 November 2009

Excellant piece of poem. Thanks a lot for sharing it.

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