Mercy Damned Comments

Beautiful words about a beautiful subject...thanks for sharing this...

Lots of good content but in my opinion it is being let down by the style you chose. Too rigid, lacking flow, staccato-like. I would revisit this in a different mood perhaps and let it flow on its own so to speak. Even the occasional rhyme would not be out of place here. H

'Dreamer and the dreamed united...' Full Kudos!

Poem expresses a lot of emotion with crying for understanding - kind of deep

Mercy Damned is a great title and your name, made me smile. The poem is superbly expressed and I would say, it is a damned good job you got this one out, because like Min says, the words were overwhelming for the reader so only god knows the release of the poet! Smiling at you, Tai, a firm believer in saying it like it is...

The words are overpowering! Mixed emotions flowing! And very mind provoking!