Mera Sarmaia, Meri Aas(Urdu) Comments

Wah wah kya baat hai.......Lovely ghazal.

na jalein umeedon ke charagh, har lamha bojhal ho jaie..../mujhe meri duaon ke jugnoo hope is the heavenly gift hope we will live long hope we will achieve hope is the cause of dope too but u took hope very positive. no light no moment to be seen.../ glow worm that leads light nice very +++

Dua, aas, jugno, kwab Wao sis how u combined these in imaginative way, after a long time i really enjoyed such fabulous Urdu poetry, want to read again n again. yeh khwab nah hon to zeest mushkil ho jai na jalein umeedon ke charagh, har lamha bojhal ho jaie

A very thoughtful urdu verse... full of the sap of life, the fountain of which are the abstract dreams... beautiful opening, conveying a feel...my wealth, my hope are these my dreams, this dejected heart has been weaving for ages...a poem with a meaningful imagery, and message! ! !