Thursday, April 25, 2019

Mera Dil Doobtey Doobtey Rehgaya Comments

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Mera dil doobtey doobtey rehgaya

he took a long deep breath
aour mere saans
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Akhtar Jawad 26 April 2019

In this sub-continent most of us speak a language that is called " Hinglish" , a language that is partly English and partly Urdu/Hindi. My fiend wrote this experimental poem in Hinglish (Hindi +English) , and it's a very good experiment.

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O POET ME POET 27 April 2019

Huzoor Sallaaamssssss and thanks for guidance

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Douglas Scotney 25 April 2019

'twas it is a tautology, mpyp. 'twas will do. Or was it.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 April 2019

not clear do u stammer sorry

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doug scotney 03 May 2019

the last shot 'twas it = the last shot it was it

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