Tuesday, July 9, 2013

Mera Dard Comments

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mera dard ek dard hai
meri rahen bas mera ek pharz hai
jise mai naa chahte hue bhii
pana chahta hun
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abhishek sharma
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Abii Sharma 13 November 2013

thank you sir. for feedback of my poemm

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 November 2013

aksar naaw jab bhi kabhi majhdhar me hoti hai to niyantran se bahar hone par nawik(Nakhuda) use uski marzi par chhod deta hai, uske marzi se naaw kinaaraa dhund leti hai Abhi zindagi yahee hoti hai jise kinaaraa assani se mil jaay wo Abhi nahi hota kavi nahi hota uljhano me ulajh kar sulajh jaanaa yahi zindagi hai shukriya Abhi bahut khub

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