Mera Astitva Tujhme Hi Samaaya Hai.......[maaa] Comments
bas tujhe hi chaha maine,, bas tujhe hi apna banaaya hai.....
teri mamta ka aihsaas hi maa,,, mere rag rag mei samaaya hai.
jalti aag mei bhi thandak de de,,, aisi tere anchal ki chhhayaa hai..
jab jab mai museebat mei padi,, tujhe tb tb sang m paaya hai...
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Its good... But i guess you should rhyme it... It will be more focused on the point and will be more intensive...
a big thanx to all 4 of u........thnx for appreciating.............
Good poem with good idea ane rhythm. I love this. go on writing.
beautiful dedicated poem to ur mother... much we speak about her it's less... keep it up gal, keep on writting and reading too good poets so that you can refine urself
mera astitva tujme samaya hai, wonderful love. My existence is in You. good write. I like your poems. please read mine and comment and vote.
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7/25/2025 11:46:39 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful dedication to Mother.