Sunday, September 1, 2013

Mera Astitva Tujhme Hi Samaaya Hai.......[maaa] Comments

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bas tujhe hi chaha maine,, bas tujhe hi apna banaaya hai.....
teri mamta ka aihsaas hi maa,,, mere rag rag mei samaaya hai.
jalti aag mei bhi thandak de de,,, aisi tere anchal ki chhhayaa hai..
jab jab mai museebat mei padi,, tujhe tb tb sang m paaya hai...
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shraddha shraddha the poetess
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C. P. Sharma 19 February 2016

Beautiful dedication to Mother.

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Ahatisham Alam 07 April 2014

deep veneration for a mother. really your love is pure.

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Shraddha The Poetess 05 September 2013

thnx utsav bhaiyaa i'll work on it...........

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Utsav Patel 04 September 2013

Its good... But i guess you should rhyme it... It will be more focused on the point and will be more intensive...

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Shraddha The Poetess 03 September 2013

a big thanx to all 4 of u........thnx for appreciating.............

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 03 September 2013

Good poem with good idea ane rhythm. I love this. go on writing.

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Kalpana Shah 03 September 2013

beautiful dedicated poem to ur mother... much we speak about her it's less... keep it up gal, keep on writting and reading too good poets so that you can refine urself

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Gajanan Mishra 01 September 2013

mera astitva tujme samaya hai, wonderful love. My existence is in You. good write. I like your poems. please read mine and comment and vote.

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