Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Meow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet is her voice, sugary the words
When she whispers, the candy melts
He craves like a bee for the honey
She never gives but only jaggery
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Rini Shibu
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Robert Murray Smith 16 May 2018

This sexy cats meows.+++10

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Sister Frances 21 October 2017

Meooow this is an adorable poem :)

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Rini Shibu 21 October 2017

Thank you so much for the comment Hannah. Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2017

An enjoyable poem nicely presented. Sweety, pretty, kitty, city - -nice words play. Thank u Rini.

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Rini Shibu 21 October 2017

Thank you so much kumar for reading Rini

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 October 2017

and nice poetry needs a bit of edit may be it's me only

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Rini Shibu 18 October 2017

Thanks for reading this poem

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 October 2017

ok kindness did u like my two hindi.mix ones posted today

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Lamar Cole 18 October 2017

This is a very delightful and enjoyable poem to read about meow.

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Rini Shibu 18 October 2017

Thanks Lam for sparing a moment to read this

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 October 2017

Metaphorically astute and poetically tasteful. Job well done. ~FjR~

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 October 2017

Metaphorically astute and tastefully poetic. Job well done...~FjR~

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Rini Shibu 18 October 2017

Thank you so much Frank.. Rini

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