Sunday, June 21, 2009

Menu Of The Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

he walked on the pavement,
tired, weak and hungry,
an school bag was on the road,
its tiny food packets scattered,
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anjali rajan
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Siddharth Singh 27 July 2009

The build up to the event is very nice. A 10.

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Jaleel Perinjanam 27 June 2009

Great work Anjali. Hope you are an artist too. The pictures you draw through the lines are apparent. Since you draw outline only, the power of the poem is immeasurably huge, especially the words you used at the boundaries of the images............... like, road lips, blinding lights, through the fumes, etc. I love it. Keep it up –Jaleel perinjanam

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Shekhar Joshi 22 June 2009

nicely written...........good one.......... ;) ..........

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 June 2009

Good write indeed.

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