he walked on the pavement,
tired, weak and hungry,
an school bag was on the road,
its tiny food packets scattered,
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Great work Anjali. Hope you are an artist too. The pictures you draw through the lines are apparent. Since you draw outline only, the power of the poem is immeasurably huge, especially the words you used at the boundaries of the images............... like, road lips, blinding lights, through the fumes, etc. I love it. Keep it up –Jaleel perinjanam
The build up to the event is very nice. A 10.