Saturday, June 18, 2016

Mental Vacuum Comments

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I welcome the mental vacuum,
I know it will not remain empty,
the outside strain is hitting my head,
and I hope a break through soon.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 03 September 2018

I think I can give a new dress to my soul, I can make up its face, I can heel up its dents, ........................................... Quite true. We cannot kill our old self or soul, but we can always mend it and make it better! Well thought out poem!

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Loke Kok Yee 21 June 2016

I'm smiling and your poem permeates my soul! thank you sir-10

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Khalid Saifullah 18 June 2016

Philosophic and thoughtful, a great poem..........................................

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Kelly Kurt 18 June 2016

To constantly try to improve one's inner self, for the benefit of others as well as one's self is a worthwhile goal

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