Thursday, April 19, 2018

Mental Age Comments

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Playing and playing and playing with toys
The old man thinks he is just like the boys.
I heard the toys what they comment for me
Their mental age I wonder to see.
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Indira Renganathan 20 April 2018

This old man is a lovely toy. At this age he is still a boy........except a few most aged are like this only...my grand children are so attached to me because I'm their age....a pragmatic thought and work

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Valsa George 20 April 2018

Age is just a number. If we think that we are young, we remain young! Even when one is aged, the child in us comes to the fore many a time! A pleasant read!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 April 2018

Wow, what a wonderful poem with great humor. I think the underlying thought of this great write is that..There is always a child inside all of us. Beautifully crafted write.10

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Kelly Kurt 19 April 2018

I am 60, but quite often feel and act like I'm 6.: -)

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