Thursday, December 12, 2019

Menopause Comments

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I sent out a personal S.O.S
She again was having pms,
I think the room was again getting too hot
As I saw a boiling pot,
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Randy McClave
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Denis Mair 12 December 2019

Hilarious! I did not expect to see so many zany plot details in a tale of mid-life crisis. It reminds me of a screwball comedy scenario. I love your take on PEA SOUP and MENOPAUSE. The clunky rhyming adds to the fun.

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