! ! ! ...' Men '...Defined.. Comments

Men are meant to be courageous, bold and loving!

! ! ! ...' MEN '...defined.. is a nice poem,10...

This was a beautiful presentation. I hope every man listened. And every woman too. Perhaps, more important for her. GW62

Nice thought and presentation! Let us love all and serve all, helping ever and hurting never!

A severe blow of vercification.10 and more.Thanks for sharing

man an woman are two parts of a single truth...this truth prevails as the 'half god half goddess' principle- Ardha Nari Eswara Thatwa- among Hindus… the combination becomes ideally harmonious where these two unite complimenting fully each other...even the elementary modern science admits the pre historic existence of unicellular bisexual being…good theme employed for the poem, sivan...ten votes...

More than poetic, these are very factual connotations like getting it in gist from a concised script. I personally feel that you could give more girth to the feel of the poem by rounding up your expressions for readers to form a more profound observation of your intent. Thanks for sharing. arya

Dear Sivan P.G Menon A very Intelligent poem with soulful thoughts. Nice vercification with a good command.Thanks for sharing Greetings Satheesan Rangorath