Sunday, October 28, 2018

Men At War Comments

Rating: 5.0

War Zone
Dust up, sounds of deadly bullets and bombs,
Triggers squeezed, blood spills, it's the combat zone.
Soldiers at war, I don't wanna fight, I just wanna go home,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 June 2020

A powerful and touching write Great imagery that portrays the true story of a great soldier at the brink of death in a war zone. Beautifully written.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 June 2020

What a deeply moving poem. The effects of war that it brings to humanity is beyond measure. It is a vicious cycle of violence. It takes away human lives, wrecks home and country and ultimately the whole humanity.

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Dave Walker 28 October 2018

War is an horrible thing, I can't imagine how it is for the Hero's who have to fight in it, a very touching poem.

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