Men Are Homeric, Women Are Ineffable Comments

Well conceived and nicely penned. A witty reflection set aside for sober reflection. Very philosophical. Thanks for sharing Matthew and do remain enriched.

Matthew, some good lines here but the entire poem is weighed down by its insistence on offering life lessons, a kind of heavy-handed philosophizing. Maybe read some good contemporary poets like Billy Collins, who can show you that a good poem can be serious but without being solemn. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC

good poem i like it..............