Thursday, April 17, 2008

'Men' Comments

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You cant trust a 'man' for all that he's worth,
He'll lie to you, then cheat on you, and you'll be the one hurt,
Cant stand a 'man' that decieves, so lucky thats not me,
Don't wanna have another 'man', that always has to lie,
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Krista Thomas
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Alan Curtis 28 May 2009

U pretty much summed up the difinition on Mankind! ! Our passion for war and women is completely innate n our nature... ;) Peace, Alan

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has in depth meaning and generalization..realistic and profound..well done!

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Jared Ashby 22 April 2008

¬_¬ big generalization, but I can feel it. Nice poem! but remember, there are a few good men out there, the only ones deserving of the title.

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'You don't know what love means' are terrible words to hear but sometimes true. In this case it seems so. We need to learn it and in a hurry.

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Bit of a sweeping generalisation in the title, but those last six words are pretty telling. t x

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