Tuesday, January 7, 2014

Memory Tracks Comments

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Whizzing poles made strange wind-tunes
Cool gusts from windows glided over my face
Coveted seat reserved with effort
On journey doze, can't waste even a minute!
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Padmanabhan Ananth
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Padmanabhan Ananth 14 January 2014

Thanks Valsa. I'm sure you've also expreienced the use of a pen (or pencil) to push the fan blade which will generally refuse move at the click of the button. Interesting experiences these.

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Valsa George 08 January 2014

A journey along the memory tracks! Inspite of all deficiencies, train journey is an experience worth re living! I specially enjoyed the lines; The fan just refused to turn on its own Needed prods with a cautious pen! Produced more noise than breeze Drowned the din, it's whirring cries

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