Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Memory Tanka 01 - Hidden Comments

Rating: 3.5

Hidden amongst leaves
A shy blossom turns her head
In the fading light
Lift her dark petals skyward
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Thomas Donnelly
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Warren Falcón 22 January 2013

Marvelous poems, Thomas. I wouldn't mind some factory verse cranked out by you. The imagistic poems, especially the tanka, Hidden, can match any poem, say, of Issa or Basho or Han Shan. Keep it up. A welcome relief to read such good verse here on poemhunters. Onward. Warren Falcon

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