While waiting in haste
at the departure station
a glimpse will not remain
on the faces of travellers
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Our memories and thoughts are just temporary. Yet, the length of time they stay depends on how they made an impact in our life. Some are like dew drops that when the Sun comes, they quickly disappear. Some cling to our minds reviving now and then our great moments and deep sorrows
A great poem woven beautifully adorned with marvelous verses and wonderful images.
The title says it all. Fascinating picture added.This must be own aquarel, sure.
I wrote time-provoking poem but each reader has already his/her own thoughts after having read this poem. Most magnifcently rendered our life's journey through fantastic metaphors. My two thumbs up for you.
Beauteous poem! A lifetime flashes in this poem, no time left to ponder too long about, since the next train will soon arrive. True amazingly built are the words, an excellent thought-provoking poem.5 Stars!
Awesome poem. It created a complete picture in mind about what we all go through at least once in our lifetime and how does it feel to cherish those moments.5***
A train station is the scenery of a wonderful poem where memories and thoughts come and go.
A poem of great depth so wonderfully conveyed. To my Poem List.