Monday, March 1, 2021

Memory Stands Like A Scarecrow. Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I wonder, where the nice fragrance of love is gone,
That spilled from the crimson flower of life.
Now when I sweep away the broken glass of the past,
The memory haunts back doing icicle,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Suzon Albert 08 March 2021

Creative poem.

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Indira Renganathan 03 March 2021

Every line is worthy of an applause...and the usage of words adds to the flavour...5*****

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Indira Renganathan 03 March 2021

Every line is worthy of an applause..and the apt usage of words add to the flavour...5*****

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Shreya Hacks 01 March 2021

Fantastic use of words. The memory haunts back doing icicle, In the inner dome of my mind.

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Darren Jkoeryo 01 March 2021

Simply brilliaqnt..I walk past the doors of an empty heart, And counts the fallen willow leaves.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 01 March 2021

Lovely poem my brother. The metaphors are sublime

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M. Asim Nehal

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