Monday, August 6, 2012

Memory Of Love Making Comments

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My back hurts,
I try to work in my knees
But those hurts too.
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Elena Sandu
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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2020

Knee woks giving you support. You still do not feel tired and work hard and write beautiful poems. Over the seven oceans your soul flies wonderfully and perceives the light of joy and dignity. In Earth you find sweet strawberry. This poem is an outstanding poem and I put my historic 39999th comment on this nice work. Thank you very much for penning this poem....10 (My thirty-nine thousand nine hundred ninety ninth comment)

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C F 13 July 2019

Well crafted poem and innovative.... you write really very well.10+

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Robert Murray Smith 17 June 2018

When working with the fruits of nature we are stained by juice. A wonderful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 February 2018

Over the ocean And the seven seas My soul I let to fly away.......oh what a fine poetic expression dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 09 February 2017

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly penned in appreciation of nature and good friendship. Thanks for sharing Elena.

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Terry Craddock 06 January 2017

Bird Eye Prey Heights from the heights from the foothills Southern Alps beautiful bird eye height watch over prey plains place thrilling watch swoop down upon dwarf lands Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Memory Of Love Making' by the poet Elena Sandu. Dedicated to the poet Elena Sandu.

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Elena Sandu 10 January 2017

I am at loss of words my friend, I can't believe my humble poem could inspire such a wonderful response, you are an amazingly creative poet, most heartfelt grateful thanks, dear Terry.

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Terry Craddock 06 January 2017

At One With Height Wind Flight Calling Calling from the heights from the foothills great Southern Alps bird eye height watch over far below checkerboard plains in spice air rarified sight beautiful thrilling is a place to watch overfly appreciate dwarf lands at one with height wind flight calling calling Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Memory Of Love Making' by the poet Elena Sandu. Dedicated to the poet Elena Sandu.

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Elena Sandu 10 January 2017

Beautiful creation, I feel so honoured, thank you dear Terry, how true, it was a unique moment, felt at one with everything, earth offer such power, can connect us, give us wings to fly with highest winds.

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Terry Craddock 06 January 2017

At One With Height Wind Flight Calling Calling from the heights from the foothills great Southern Alps bird eye height watch over far below checkerboard plains in spice air rarified sight beautiful thrilling is a place to watch appreciate dwarf lands at one with height wind flight calling calling Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Memory Of Love Making' by the poet Elena Sandu. Dedicated to the poet Elena Sandu.

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Terry Craddock 05 January 2017

'Over the ocean And the seven seas My soul I let to fly away' love these lines and the disembodied 'From up I watch and listen to myself: ' height is always a beautiful thrilling place to watch and appreciate the world below, nice themes

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 September 2016

In harmony with nature, it's a great experience. Heartiest Congratulations for the saame as also on Poem of the Day to the related song.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2016

Nice to see your poem here as the poem of the day. Bringing joy to many children and having bond with nature's loving memory make this poem very special. Interesting and excellent this is definitely.10

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2016

Thank you dear Kumamarni, you are so kind my friend, I was just praying, I have no idea if my helping brought any joy to the kids that were coming to pick the strawberries yet I hope that some of the positive thoughts of those moments somehow, indirectly, could have had some influence...

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2016

There are no words to describe how surprised and happy I am to find my poem here. Heartfelt thanks to those who put it up and to all the people who took time read and comment on my humble try to keep the memory of a wonderful moment of connection. It looks like every connection may create more connections, what a great honour and joy to be one of its branches! Most grateful thanks to everybody, Elena

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Savita Tyagi 28 September 2016

Working with hands, bonding with nature can be back breaking but very comforting. This is a beautiful tribute to a friend and to Nature too. She rewards us thousand times more than what we give back. Marvelous poem. Congratulations and thank you for sharing.

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2016

Thank you so much dear Savita, how true you speak, I am so very grateful to my friend, Meral is her name, for allowing me to have the experience of bonding with nature. Because of such, these days I try to be grateful for everything that I get on my table. Often trying to think and thank mentally to the people who work hard for my food, send love and gratitude to nature, but also asking forgiveness for the way we are treating it..

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Malcolm Two 28 September 2016

Nice poem, thanks for sharing with us. Keep up

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2016

Thank You, dear Malcom!

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Seamus O Brian 28 September 2016

A lovely piece. A relationship is not without its pain and bruises. Our relationship with life and the earth that sustains us is not exempt. Intriguing perspective, and very nicely done. Congratulations! :)

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2016

Thank you dear Neal, I am learning from the truth you share here, maybe we need those pain and bruises so that we learn how to empath more with our surroundings?

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Clarence Prince 28 September 2016

Bring joy to many children, Oh Lord help!

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2016

Thank you dear Clarence, praying with you, today, for all the children!

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Rajnish Manga 28 September 2016

What a wonderful poem! It is indeed a celebration of all lovely things including sweet and delicious fruits that the earth provides to us every now and then. Yes, the man has to perspire to get it. Thanks for sharing the poem, Elena. And Congrats for being the poet of the day.

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2016

Thank you dear Rajnish, how well you put it, indeed, working the fields should be a celebration that I think no man should miss. Maybe one day, it will be included in our education curriculum?

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M Asim Nehal 28 September 2016

This is very crafty poem and Congrats for POTD honours.10++

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2016

Awesome you are, dear Mohammed, thank you!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 28 September 2016

Picking SBs in the field is not a simple act of plucking. When you are at it, you see them, touch them and feel them, smell them, taste them and you visualize too. On the ground your soul devours a world. After all, it is nature, you are engulfed in. Wonderful write. Congrats for being The PoD. X

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2016

Thank you so much dear Jayatissa, wonderful mindfulness isn't it? On the ground your soul devours a world, wow, you put volumes of life in 7 words, amazing pen you shared here, I am so grateful!

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Bharati Nayak 28 September 2016

By being one with nature filled your heart with pure bliss and strengthened your body and mind.Those marvelous feelings are like sweet strawberries- - - -Thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being Poet of the Day.

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