Saturday, June 23, 2012

Memory Lane Comments

Rating: 3.1

Strolling down the memory lane,
Mirages do not seem so strange.
Trails of nostalgia stay engraved,
In the happiness I once embraced.
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Haden Chua
COMMENTS
Geetha Jayakumar 20 July 2014

Congrats.....Short and meaningful write. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing..

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Savita Tyagi 20 July 2014

Beautiful with impressive imagery. Enjoyed it.

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Leslie Philibert 20 July 2014

not bad, but memory lane is a terrible cliche, sorry, my POV...

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Joseph Poewhit 20 July 2013

Past just won't let go

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Yasmin Khan 20 July 2013

Very beautiful write with vivid images

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Gleb Zavlanov 20 July 2013

A great write. I enjoyed it. Thanks.

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Rubab Atwal 20 July 2013

beautifully written.i enjoyed it..

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Gajanan Mishra 20 July 2013

very heart touching really, thanks.

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Jasmine Xi Zhang 21 July 2012

wow i really love your poem! very wel written, and your describtion of this nostalgic feeling is very recognisable for me.

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Simon Odhiambo 21 July 2012

wonderfully written. precise!

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John Tiong Chunghoo 20 July 2012

lovely.....lovely poem haden.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 July 2012

Nice to read the trails of nostalgia stay engraved! Beautiful!

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