Friday, August 31, 2012

Memory Foam..... Peace In A Bottle..... Adultish Comments

Rating: 5.0

At last....
Held embryonic pose
No pause for thought just
Sleeping rose
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karen sinclair
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Anita Sehgal 03 October 2012

enjoyed reading this poem too!

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Anita Sehgal 03 October 2012

enjoyed reading this poem too!

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Chuck Audette 21 September 2012

Sounds good, but rather than a shoulder, I prefer mammary foam to lay 'neath my head.; ^)

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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 September 2012

ith jolt of genesis creation cries heart to engross upon myth of earthly mystery mellowed rose reminisces tranquil breath of night sipping beauty of green yet unobtrusive soul seems to swaddle awakening joy clouds of mist ramifies into warmth of universe gravity is law of attraction to resuscitate apple to fall dream slowly redeems at altar of longing belonging bequeaths holding qualms of conscience, wonderful write

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Eric Cockrell 16 September 2012

beautiful, peaceful, warm, and vibrant!

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Hamid Negah 05 September 2012

Very nice writting...i loved it.

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Valerie Dohren 03 September 2012

Beautiful poem, enjoyed the read.

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Payal Parande 01 September 2012

beautiful poem from a beautiful heart...a splendid write mam...such a perfect words making a perfect sonnet... love it thank you for sharing, love payal

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Danny Draper 31 August 2012

A nice write, personal and intimate. Those we long for and fit together so well when united, lovely.

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