Memory Birds. Comments

Memories are like birds, some are ugly some are beautiful but we live with both..............10

you nailed that one with truth great truth and its excellent poem.

you requested that i read this and another of your poems, which i am glad to do. but i have 'trouble' with several parts. some of what you write, i don't understand and some words i believe are improperly used. if you ask me to spend more time on this, i will try to take the time later. i believe a lot of the problem(s) has to do with lack of experience with english. forgive me if i am wrong (i think forgive me, but i'm not sure i need to be forgiven) i DO like the rhyming, but i would often rather understand a poem better and have fewer rhymes in the poem. thanks for sharing. bri :)

Do they migrate farther, But not the endless miles Ever do fade their smiles. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A hidden message for mankind! ................Don't be overwhelmed by difficulties, face them with a smile! ..... kudos! ....

Memories of the dead and the living like birds 'in brainy branches dwell'....(I enjoyed that usage) Some are painful, some are pleasurable... some heal us of our wounds... Memories may fly from us like migratory birds... but they won't tarry for long! Some how, we have to live through life with all these memories... both painful and pleasant...! A great write! !

so wonderfully penned life's journey through sun and rain!

Lovely and fascinating.. i shall endorse more...10 Birds do migrate And relate True hardship And companionship It is their love and resolve That solves Life time problem For breeding and concerning them