Saturday, May 7, 2016

Memory And Pain (Haiku) Comments

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Udaya R. Tennakoon
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Savita Tyagi 10 May 2016

Excellent! Dr. Fab has really inspired us. He is so kind and encouraging with his suggestions. I have been reading every body's haiku on forum. Thanks for sharing.

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Fabrizio Frosini 08 May 2016

would you like to submit it for the book? May I suggest 2 edits? '' Winter moon On the snow it moves gently - Footprints of you ''

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of course, I agree.. thanks dear Fab

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Udaya R. Tennakoon

Udaya R. Tennakoon

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