Tuesday, January 1, 2008

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I'm here again,
but I am not afraid,
not any more.
This place
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Rebekah Gamble
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Serenity Prayer 03 August 2008

it makes me wonder what exactly happened, but of course thats your personal life so i wont ask. but very good write. i enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work!

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Ben Gieske 05 January 2008

I liked reading this poem very much. Nice format/quick, short lines/contrasting words. It reads quickly at first since there is no fear or hesitation, then slows up into a more quiet, calmer atmosphere: one of safety if not “acceptance”. It involves so many of the senses.

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Rebekah Gamble

Rebekah Gamble

Pittsburgh, Penna., U.S.A.
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