Memory Comments

Well done Basim Al Aoda, You talk with Jasmine like Neruda for leave or depart. birds flock fly. Beautiful pictures and imagination (I spread my soul around it) and contradictions (remains nor leaves) , and with the hope (Childhood) to approach. I give you 9+. Keep working...improving the wording, enriching the language.Bravo Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

...a fine composition indeed..........10+

Sometimes the mind plays tricks and memories play hide and seek.Very nice poem.I gave you ten.Keep writting.....