Tuesday, March 31, 2009

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Metal glistened,
I found hope,
In a blade,
That helped me cope.
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Amy Fifita
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Lee Crowell 14 April 2009

Amy you are the best young poet I've read on this site, and this poem is your best that I've found. It's a little scary that you hover around the theme of suicide because your talent will be wasted if we don't get to see it mature and flourish. Also, most of your postings center around the idea of finding one's self. I'd like to see you set that idea aside and pick a totally obscure topic. Sometimes we find our true nature when we distance our personal lives from our art. Please send me a message when you post something new.

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