Thursday, July 6, 2006

Memory Comments

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i wake in the morning and there's the thought of you
you said that you were leaving and i didnt want to face the truth
it seems like your the only thing on my mind
without you here i cant sleep at night
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Kadelynn Roberson
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mohsin amin khan 01 May 2010

sadness is a great pen while writing poetry you have done a miracle by writing this poem

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Ruby Root 06 July 2006

Wow takeisha, you sound like you were never able to move on. This is so sad. You need to move forward so you can live your life. I can relate to this and I think most people can. Your poem was good but again really sad. Take care.

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