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Dear: Valsa George thanks for your comments, I will read your new poem 'Despair Versus Hope' and it is OK and possible for poets to have same message and points of views, wish you all the best.. ***

Strange enough, I too have posted a poem today, 'Despair Versus Hope', sounding the same message. However grim the situation may be, we will be able to come out of it, if we try hard and remain patient till the end. The whole poem appealed to me so much and you have presented it in your own unique way!

It seems on the way to reach the fairness kingdom the fire of wars has burnt your feather even though, there were no safe space in the big heaven, to fly in it but you haven't lost the hope A beautiful poem....! Though the feathers of the little bird are burnt and it has no space in the big heavens to fly safely, it hasn't lost its hope! Yes, we have to cling onto hope till the last!

Peace is what the present world needs. You do not give up hope. Beautiful poem much symbolic. Nice use of metaphor 10+

Dear Madam Susan... Really my poems are nothing without your readings... Or in another way by rewriting my poem with your fantastic ways of reading them....many thanks again

I am delighted to find yet another extremely well-written piece of literature! Those closing lines opened the poem up again! ! ! And this poem is written with layers for the reader to explore again and again! ! ! ! 10+++++

Hope! ! ! Still searching for the loved one. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Wonderful write. Fine to read. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

Another beautifully written and delivered poem Soran. Thank you. We all have the free will to choose to become that symbolic little bird, which is so eloquently expressed and there is the mention of hope, which in life is never a bad thing Thank you once again.10++ and added to my favourites.

A beautiful Sonnet. Memories are oft like this, from our childhood. As a child all things seemed not unraveled yet, but when maturity has come into our life, we will get the answers of our childhood years, which we still have no answers. Wonderful picture added.