Tuesday, December 8, 2015

Memory Comments

Rating: 4.5

I still hold you
In the clutter
That my heart has become
My mind is at war,
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Nosheen Irfan
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Queeny Gona 11 May 2017

A reluctant state of not fully bidding farewell to the one you were in love in the past. You have penned it so well how heart and Mind compose themselves for internal battle. Ultimately you can shun off only when your heart is willing!

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Pregnant with a sweet passion that would not be denied! Well done my friend!

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M Asim Nehal 29 December 2015

Memory of love written fantastically, .............I loved it,10+

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Ashek Sarker 08 December 2015

enjoyed this beautiful poem.thank you for sharing

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Aditi Mohanty 08 December 2015

Nice poem

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Manonton Dalan 08 December 2015

when heart decide head will follow... thanks for sharing

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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