Sunday, September 18, 2011

Memory Comments

Rating: 5.0

Long time no see
stranger, you remember me?
The way we moved and matched w/ ease
The way you seemed to understand me
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Peace Aisogun
COMMENTS
Stefanie Fontker 26 September 2011

Very interesting choice of words and structure. I really like this, you're good at putting a poem together. Very beautiful writing, and you are right, there's nothing as unique as each individual memory.

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Dave Walker 19 September 2011

Good poem nice flow to it. Lets see some more. May i invite you to read one of my poems Called, for michael hicky. A true story

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