Monday, November 16, 2020

Memories Woven Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

Times those were awesome
That we wove together
Even today also enlighten
Every element of our soul.
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Rajnish Manga 18 November 2020

As vast as an ocean/ Is your cosy feel Makes even idle things also important With the mere touch of your presence.... //.... Aptly translated. When fate favours you, you get the feel of Alladin's lamp near you which provides everything that you need. A fine portrayal indeed. Thanks..

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Suresh Kumar Ek 17 November 2020

Your cosy feel within me As vast as an ocean Woven memories Intricately interlaced.

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Kostas Lagos 16 November 2020

I love this poem! Thank you for posting!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 16 November 2020

Good one. Thank for thr translation.

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Dipak Adhya 16 November 2020

One's own feeling has the sublimity... It entices you for such creation.... Very good.

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