Sunday, December 7, 2008

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His hand on the trigger
Gun aimed at his heart
From this world
He wishes to depart
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Brianna Trombley
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, , , , , , 18 January 2009

wow that's really d&m so sad but i like that the darkness doesn't win in the end

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Kimber Harrison 07 December 2008

An amazing acclomplishment...that's about as close as I can get to what I feel about this...it really is wonderful!

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 07 December 2008

A poem-tale about a particular state. I wonder whether this author knows 'The Darkness Song' by Dino Campana, an italian poet of the twentieth century. However these lines are written very well.

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Brianna Trombley

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