Memories Of You...... Comments

This is a poem with an interesting take on a couple of relationships but it does not read as well as it should because some of the words need to be checked by the writer to make sure the words are spelled correctly. If the corrections are made, it should be a very nice little poem. GW62

its a lovely poem full of feellings..........really touching memories you have.......but little bit of sad i wish you for your better life....keep writing thanks..........10+++++