Size 14 black boots
across a field of new snow...
stomping with relish [1]
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Ohio enthralls / Either snowfall or sunshine / Seasons in parade
I felt cold and my eyes are all white in imagery sense...thats how effective your Haiku to me... The best thing is when you turn a memory to be a written version...it is kinda a camera that translate into words! keep it up :) .
A beautiful description of a snow laden countryside with trees bearing snowflakes on their dark twigs. On the newly fallen snow the fresh boot marks are visible. The contrast of white and black that represents the antagonistic side of human life adds an extra dimension to the poem.
In my place in Odisha, we have tropical climate and we have never experienced the snow fall.But your poem is so vivid as if I am experiencing it.A beautiful poem along with your notes on whiteness and blackness make it a worthy read.
Enjoying the way you have brought these surprising rain and snow experiences alive with your words!
Wow! I can see and feel the whiteness and cold snowflakes falling down and rising too, the light filters through the pure avalanche of a deep reflection of life and nature! Outstanding write!
The imagery presented in this poem is awesome.beautiful write