Friday, March 12, 2010

Memories Of Past Lost Comments

Rating: 0.0

Complete darkness
I am in complete darkness
With my one true fear
And those few short lived flickers
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Tristan Maverick
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Audrey Monroe 07 April 2011

This one, like your others is packed with emotion. I like the continuing theme and the use of metaphor is very skillful. Definite 10.

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Tristan Maverick

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