meeting with the sea
babies taking their first bath
they won't remember
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Excellent joining of three senryu under one umbrella- sad to think how fragmentary and fragile and transient our memories are- - even our most treasured. pass away... 10++++++++++++++++++++++++
Great piece. I love your innate skills but I wonder why don't you pen? Of course, it's your personal decision but please keep writing.