Wednesday, April 18, 2018

Memories Of Life (Senryu Series) Comments

Rating: 5.0

meeting with the sea
babies taking their first bath
they won't remember
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2022

Great piece. I love your innate skills but I wonder why don't you pen? Of course, it's your personal decision but please keep writing.

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Susan Williams 21 April 2018

Excellent joining of three senryu under one umbrella- sad to think how fragmentary and fragile and transient our memories are- - even our most treasured. pass away... 10++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kelly Kurt 18 April 2018

Poignantly portrayed. I read this over and over.

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Kostas Lagos 18 April 2018

A chain of superb senryu! I salute you!

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