Sunday, September 17, 2017

Memories In Ripples Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sweet slumber I knew in long hazy summer nights
That did seal within me all visions of beautiful, wonderful sights
The pure innocence of childhood blasted when I was not accompanied by worries or fears
Then of her beauty my mind was overwhelmed; she was lovely; eternal; untouched by earthy years
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Nero CaroZiv
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Jazib Kamalvi 20 September 2017

Write comment. Great imagination, Nero. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 17 September 2017

A sophisticated expression of passion lest it does offend anybody. A real masterpiece. Thanks. Then of her beauty my mind was overwhelmed.... Maid so modest Her vision always appear at night against the moon loom

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