Ωραίο! Ο τρίτος στίχος καλλίτερα να ήταν πάλι μια εικόνα, όχι συμπέρασμα, διαπίστωση.Αυτά δεν τα θέλει η ποίηση.
Shadows Cast Memories our memories click emotions re-presenting life our wick lives demand selective screening Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the haiku 'Memories' by Mihaela Pirjol ripple effect :)
Our memories re-presenting life our lives demand selective screening.
Pictures captured upon the mental camera re-presenting itself. Nicely penned.
Wow s great haiku with imagination's ink in picturing the memories like on the slate of life in the mind. Nice to read u again wow.
Mental screen generates beautiful thoughts and actions are planned. This screen gathers beautiful memories of every moment. This is an interesting Haiku...10