Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Memories At The Present Comments

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Memories At The Present
As I walk down the river
As I walk near the sea
As I walk in the gardens
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Bri Edwards 22 August 2019

I met me once, on a sunny day in Israel. I didn't like me, so I decided to find someone else! But, I liked everybody else even LESS! : ( bri

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2019

My inner soul mate! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 April 2019

beautiful poem.....................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 April 2019

Every present memory motivates mind. While walking across the river and sea we fell a different mood that is special. We gain great view of tributary. Without petals billions or millions of roses cannot give beauty. Expression of beauty is brilliantly and excellently done in this interesting poem. Memory of paradise is nicely presented...10

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Donward Bughaw 29 May 2016

wow..nice poem madaam

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Thank you so much, Donward! Good to see you here on Poemhunter´s ground. Be blessed in abundance, dear poet friend. Amen.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 13 August 2015

I walk down the river. I walk down the sea. Thorn less roses are so beautiful and sweet. The fragrances spread life with glitter of interesting feeling. Very finely given touch here. Finding inner soul mate is interesting.....10

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Thank you so much, Mrs. Bhargabi, I feel humbled and honored by thy visit. This is poem of long gone years, but I still like it. God´s Blessings in Abundance! Amen, Thank you so much for the precious 10.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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