Gone are the memories of rock on.
Now, the memories are only to mourn.
Discarding the past, the next will born,
whatever it happens, the show must go on.
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we have to persist, it is essential of being patient in order to exist..yes authenticity alone will survive..... true. we have to be true to ourselves and people will know from our behavior if we are true. very great thought and suggestions..... again the word endings of your poem... marvelous.. tony
Thank you so much sir.....You have given your valuable time to read and comment on my poem..
The past has gone but has taken away many memories and treasured with time. New time will begin and new memories will take birth. Sadness and difficulties come and go. But authenticity of perception remains with memories. A brilliant perceptional poem is wisely and interestingly penned...10
Lovely poem full of hope and optimism. Memories give us joy and they give us pain. We can’t change them but we can always change our outlook for present and live and enjoy and face it with all our strength. Thank you for sharing. Also thanks for visiting my page and leaving a comment. Poem hunter doesn’t always makes it easy to leave a comment. I do appreciate the patience needed to leave a comment. Wish you best in your poetic journey.
Thank you so much Mam for reading my poem and appreciating it.