Monday, January 9, 2017

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I am standing in the street of my childhood,
and the blue April sky
rises above me,
glittering like a dreamy eye.
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Walter W. Safar
childhood standing april
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Cleveland Gibson 23 March 2019

I think the idea for your poem is good. You might consider tightening up in places for that sharper, hitting effect. That's my opinion. Look at each line again and consider. How to writer it better. Best wishes Cleveland

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 December 2017

Yearning! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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